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Monday, April 9, 2012

Week 15: Empty


Blanks

To live and not love
Is to never have lived at all
A blank existence
Like a quiver with no arrows
I'm not sure what the inspiration was for this one. I like it although, I think the flow is a little halting and the final line somewhat stands apart from the rest of the piece. 7.5/10 for me.

Still though, it remains, yours
Lloyd Webber

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